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Death must be paid, He became the sacrifice.
They laughed, they mocked as the lashes struck.
He cries in pain for the things we've done.
Could you see His love with each strike?
The way the whip ripped His flesh just for us.
Nailed to the cross, both hands, both feet.
A crown of thorns, His royal mockery.
'Crucify Him.' We yelled to the soldiers.
The cross came up for Him to hang.
We watched with contentment-
For our evil hearts to be seen.
The innocent Lamb, our sacrifice.
"Father forgive them, for they-
know not what they do."
Those were His last words,
For God to forgive us of our evil.
But why, I wonder, would He do such a deed?
With His finale breath 'It is finished.'
Darkness fell.
Thunder crashed, the earth shook.
The veil was torn in half.
People ran, people screamed.
But few stood to stare.
One soldier repented,
For he saw the Son of God.
Death could not hold Him,
Three days slipped away,
The tomb was opened,
The burial cloth lay empty.
The Son of God rose from the dead.
Now we wait in wonder,
For the coming of our King.
Clothed in splendorous white.
He rides on the winds of Heaven,
Coming to our rescue once and for all.
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Jesus loves you :D
There is a Man I suddenly met.
A stranger, who I didn't know of.
He told me that He'll love me forever.
Even if I hurt Him many times,
He'll still love me.
He told me He'll keep His promises.
He told me He'll never break my heart.
He told me me He'll never leave me alone.
He told me He'll be always there for me.
He told me He can give me everything I need.
He told me He suffered and died for me.
He said He can conquer death to save me.
He told me many things that made me cry
because of joy.
I can't believe I didn't notice Him before.
All my life, without seeing Him, He was there,
Watching over me.
Protecting me every hou
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I'm with God
I go into church..
I feel as if all distractions were gone..
As if my ADHD was cured.
Babies screaming to the right of me.
Mother hushes it..
I don't mind...
I'm glad she chose life..
The noise doesn't matter..
I'm with God.
Man coughing to the left of me.
He trys not to..
He says sorry for the disruption..
I say that I don't mind...
I'm with God.
I go to recieve the Eucharist.
The person handing it out says
The Body of Christ
I say Amen... I'm ready to recive the Eucharist
I have my hands out..
He sticks it right in my mouth..
A little awkward, but I don't care..
I'm with God.
Brother poking me, saying it's time to go.
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God's Plan
You know what you want to be
When you feel a pang in your stomach and heart
Whenever it comes up
You don't care what others say
But you know that someone is calling you to be this person
Have faith that God is leading you in the right direction
Hold his hand through the denial
Through the pain
Through the support or rejection of your family and friends
When you have made up
You can't be dissuaded
I stand for what I believe in
And I am ready to accept God's plan for me
Even if it means looking death in the eyes
And living with pain all of my life
I am ready to let Jesus take the wheel
And steer me in the right direction
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Written for the sixth day of the National Poetry Writing Month.
Also, I wrote it for on going contest Death can't hold me down. which ends on Easter Sunday.
You can find the death of Jesus in John chapter 19.
This is the true meaning of Easter, not the easter eggs or the candy or any of that kid stuff. The real meaning of Easter is the rising of our King Jesus. He is the center of 'Good Friday.' For His sacrifice wasn't just for a select few people who truly believe in Him, no, His sacrifice was for every single person on this planet. EVERYONE. But it's your choice to believe, to accept Him and God or not to. But I promise you, no one will ever make that kind of sacrifice for you like He did, no one will EVER love you the way He loves you.
Can you grasp that? Loving someone so much to be whipped, mocked, nailed to a cross with a crown of THORNS? (And those aren't small thorns, these are thick at least one-two inch thorns being dug into His head.)
That's love.
But He's not dead, for death could not hold Him. He rose to Heaven, where He sits at our Father's Throne.
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My goodness.... such DEPTH of the Holy Spirit you have, Jamie! The only thing I would say is slow down on your typing. Not the "vile" that was torn in half, but, the "veil". That would be in the fourth paragraph. Yes, I am being REALLY picky (but cyberdads can do that!) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Other then that MINISCULE thing.... your writing skills are over the top! (I can't believe they need a 100 word minimum on these critiques) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I would say one final thing to you, Jamie.... it's really difficult for little old me to improve upon your perfection. Happy Easter to you and your family! Come to think of it, Jesus is not only the reason for the Christmas season. He's the reason for Easter as well!