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To Vow

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Vowing to always serve the King,
                                                                                                          Willing to lay your life on the line.
                To stay eternally loyal and true,
                                                                                      Tossing your own desires and needs aside,
For this one dream to become something more,
                                                                                                           To forever forsake the love of a woman,
                                           Just to protect, serve and honor your King.

This didn't come out like I was wanting :faint:
I wanted to write about someone forsaking 'love' to become the server of the king, to become the knight for the king but it snipped.

Bit cheeky and I may edit it when my head doesn't hurt so much.

Critiques/comments always encouraged.



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"Cheeky" ? I await your edit! :) Hope your head feels better!!! :hug: