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Sooner or later

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Sooner or later you'll love me.
If I have to buy the moon to give it to you.
I will cross the ocean and climb Mount Everest
To show you the depth of this love;
When life brings you down and you just wanna drown,
I will take your hand and whisper in your ear.
Of how amazing, beautiful and irreplaceable you are.

Sooner or later you'll see all I say is true.
That the words I speak reside in my heart
You will see that actions I perform are mine alone,
By choice of this devotion.
That all I do is solely for you,

Sooner or later I'll be gone,
Life will rip me from this role.
Like the wind stirring me in the desert.
One day you wont have me anymore;
That you'd think you will be left all alone.
Dear sweet love, my spirit shall rebound.
My love will forever resonate here with you.
Just listen to the whispers in the breeze,
The peace through the mountains,
The lapping along the ocean shores.
I'll be there.


Sooner or later you'll know
[you'll see]
Sooner or later you'll believe
[you'll smile]
'Cause sooner or later you'll
[ love me too.]

Written for :iconlive-love-write:\'s weekly writing prompt \' Sooner or later\'

I love Rascal Flatts, they have such a calming effect on my. :love:

Well, anyway, comments/critiques are encouraged.


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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/l/a/l…" alt=":iconlachoirplz:" title="lachoirplz"/>

There's a lot of positive emotion in this piece. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/> The affection and dedication is very clearly expressed, but I also liked how you introduced some realistic themes and hints at darker ones later in the piece. It helped things flow very well and also makes the story told here very believable. I also like how many of the lines implored hesitation on the other person's part; it's a good reflection of the many complications relationships often face, even when they are ones based on dedication.

The ending with the repeated "sooner or later" was also very catchy. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod"/> Keep up the good work!



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