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Pancake batter.

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      Silly laughs, And grabs of giggles. As I watch your face, Go from grumpy, Simply to happy. Because I blew a kiss to you.
    I heard those words. Like a vapor of wind, Blowing across my heart. Skippin' steps, And bouncin' balls. I'm caught up in you, As you speak, 'I love you.'
      Slappin' pancakes, On the ground. Huffed signs, Turned to faked frowns. From pancake batter, On your nose, To pancake batter, In my toes. Playin' chase, In a messy kitchen. Slippin' on egg shells, Into your arms that smell.

I'm like totally hyper right now, and it started as soon as I started listening to [link] for the first time. (Ever mention how much I love this couple?)
Anyway it got me in a real gibby/happy/hyper mood, and this piece quickly shot out of me.
Need a laugh? :rofl:



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3wyl
I really like the alliteration and how that seems to add further emphasis to the words. I think the way you've described it really reflects itself in the overall atmosphere and the tone...

Seems quite light-hearted and warm, here. :)

Loving, almost...

I like it, anyway. It feels almost perfect, family wise. :nod: