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His hand took mine in the darkness,
He led me down a hall like only a bat could at night.
The creeping noises echoing off the walls- like a thousand voices.
They spoke loudly yet no words seemed to ever come out,
My guide was just as silent as he made his way forward.
Heart pounding my feet pushed me onward, unable to stop.
Fear racing down my spine like cold hard fingers,
And not until the keeper took out his key and opened the door,
Did I finally understand where I was meant to be...
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Written for 's contest 'Phobias/Fears'
just kind of a spur of the moment piece because today is the deadline.
As you can tell by the ending that you have to fill in the blank of what's through the door, what her FEAR is.
Kinda like a box, we all have to look into to pull out what scares us most, and it's not always the same for each person.
So, for the readers, fill in the blanks. ^^
All critiques/comments are encouraged.
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the ending is unique. not in a movie-that-leaves-you-hanging sort of way but more of the imaginative sort of way