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MY sweet Daniel

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      Dear Daniel, my sweet man. How you look at me, Makes me feel like sand. Along the shore of oceans love [oceans love] You take me into your arms; And hold me like precious rubies. The way you stand at night, Watching out for the darkness. To keep me safe, [always keeping me safe] None have you loved like you love me, None have I loved like I love you. I look at you and it's all there, Written across that handsome face. Engraved within your heart [that braces me] My sweet Daniel, my sweet man. Hold me until the world ends. So while chaos breaks out from all around, We'll be together never to be found.   Time rocks by as older ages fade too fast. But this love grows solid as everything else is left in the past. I'll love you forever as you lie by my side, Forever remains a mystery as only eternity can decide.

Inspired by my man, the most amazing and loving and caring and affectionate fellow I know. A man I love with every fiber of my being and have since the day he came into my life.
The other night while I was cuddling with him we just looked into each others eyes and it was so, so clear that everything I feel for him is felt back 'from' him. He constantly reminds me of that.
And he shows his affection for me every day, by a kiss on the cheek or a chest to lean into when I feel bad.
He truly is the most amazing gift from God, words will never be enough to fully express how much I love him.

Peace Daniel Gandy, I love you.

' I watch you sleep in morning light,
How your eyes hold shut so peacefully tight.
As if there is nothing you fear,
Anything you could bear, but losing me.
Know, sweet one, I'll never leave you.'



I still think my rhyming is bad, but please leave a comment/critique on how I can improve on the 'rhyming' class of poetry. Every bit of advise is taken into account.


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the other night while I was cuddling....