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I'd never be missed

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*Strokes of the guitar begin to fill the air.*

His promises came easier than breathing,
But never could he keep a single one.
Ohhh, how I held onto the faith in him,
Letting this compassion... letting this love
Lead me to forgiveness, time and again...

Pushing, forcing, longing for him to hold me,
But he always left me in the freezing cold.
Bit by bit my heart tearing...
Though I tried even as I cried,

To be his everything, -his everything...



And I still remember.
How this heart bled on the floor,
On the day he walked out the door.
My pride kept me in my place,
Wishing he'd change his mind,
But he'd never look back..


I'd never be missed.

Didn't really turn out like I had planed, but it got the message across I suppose. :shrug::yawn:
I think it could be worked on a bit more, but would like to know what anyone/everyone thinks.

Don't worry, my next piece will be happier, hopefully. :giggle:



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