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Do you feel alive?

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    Is it the beating in your heart? The sweet taste of freedom, Or maybe the gentleness of love? Or is it when you see the birth of new life, Smiles shown on those faces. Does any of it make you feel alive?


Is it jumping from a cliff into water,
Getting tossed from a giant bull,
Feeling the earth shake beneath you,
Or standing in a hurricane?
Does the wild side of life bring you excitement?
Does it make you feel alive?

    Is it the gentle flow of rushing water, A breeze blowing through your hair, A soft lick from a dog's tongue, Or maybe the setting of the sun, Do they make you feel - - so utterly complete? So amazingly alive?

Written for :iconlive-love-write:s weeks writing prompt:


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Gods-Glory's avatar
While I don't claim to be understanding of ALL poetry (not "cultured", I guess :)), the tree trunks made me think of veins and arteries in the heart. Not sure what that all means, but as you know I am a DEFINITE photo-guy! :)