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- There was something about that day that stood out to me more than any other, because in-spite of myself I believed your God awful lie until then and I wasn't even a bit mad at you once I knew the truth. It was November twenty-second 2010, I had been working all day with one client after another, multiple photo shoots that were more tiring on me than humanly possible. I was beat and all I wanted was to come home to be with you, I was completely and utterly fooled that you'd be there for me. When I arrived at your apartment you were, how do I say, angry that I hadn't called first. That confused me, hurt me, nearly ripped me apart inside. All I needed was you and you were mad at the fact, I didn't try to push myself on you though, I simply turned, exhausted and left like you wanted. But I wasn't blinded in-spite of how defeated I felt, 'she' was in your apartment, and you hadn't even tried to hide her boney legged form from my sight. I could even briefly see her smug face through the crack of the door, smug and ugly. Looking back I still can't remember if I cried at all, relief had filled me though I could not understand it. A burden had lifted off my shoulders and flown away in the wind, I felt completely at peace that you had turned me away. I was no longer bound to you, I was free. Though had I thought before that day that you were a two timing loser, a player with no other name, I would've thought my world had ended on site. But on the contrary that wasn't the case at all. Your betrayal was like Heavens answer to me. Because I found the light inside Him, burning down like a flame of glorious splendor. He guided me straight into my future, into the arms of a true and faithful man. Had you not played a heartless role I would've remained stuck in a doomed life of misery. So, I thank you for playing that role so well.
Written for
's weekly challenge. 'Betrayal.'I wanted to do a tad different style of writing, I think it came off more like a letter.
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Wow... that's a roller-coaster of emotions! I really love the way you write. Good endings are always SOO much better to swallow... 